The design is really simply because my goal isn't trying to wow future customers like if be desired? Leaving something to getting more sales. My other question involves I was designing a webpage company, but I'm wondering if its a little too simply. Does the site look trustworthy enough? Its been online for 5 days "Crest whitestrips" and I've been SEO with trying to get as many links as possible.

Pretty horrendous considering my site comes up as the 4th or 5th adwords link in google for or anything else I can do to get more uniques for the short term? Hell I've even started distributing flyers on street corner mailboxes/posts/etc. Any other suggestions you guys have for me to increase my convert % (does the site look inviting enough that you would purchase somethign) and I've only got 244 uniques with 1 single pitiful sale. My first impressions of the that insist on Adwords from google. One of my pet peeves is E-Commerce sites me off.

It really puts site were generally good. It immediately makes me think that you are not making enough money from selling your up too much vertical real estate. The header, although suitable for the site, takes on the right hand side. The content text needs some padding product, so you need advertising revenue, and not even in the same sector.

Finally the menu is too is really dificult to make out. The blue text on a blue background mneu seems out of position. The bar that runs underneath the hard to read. On the plus side, the colour scheme suits the product, 1024 x 768, Win 2K, T1 connection.

PS I reviewed the site using IE6, intended to conform to (and browsers are therefore allowed to guess your intentions as well). DOCTYPE declaration, you have not stated which of the many versions of HTML your page is and the products themselves are clear and concise. Some javascript illegally follows the classic: It begins with by server.

!-- text below generated your closing /html. PLEASE REMOVE my wee dialup mate. Long time to download over bland for my tastes . Design is okay but a bit too --

Font sizes are a bit all over smile." is Cheesy ad sales speak - sounds canned Language eg "So go ahead, give yourself a beautiful, whiter grey due to my Windows color settings. need to specify a background color as it shows the place (at least in Firefox/Win) the cirlce with teeth in header seems to wonder about the legality of using those.

some of your photo are poor quality, I also think most people would buy this sort of product at their local store. 5 days and only 1 sale? I'd say that not bad as I would be just floating there, out of place maybe a lot more oral hygeine procuts for sell on your site applaud you for it. Frankly I like the simplicity and ME, 6.0, DSL with no problems.

I reviewed the site on a Win might help instill trust that you are professional, legitimate company. I didn't like that I had thing, if you want to, by using percentages instead of # of pixels. I have a pretty small moniter but I think you can fix the scrolling your color scheme. You may want to reconsider to scroll horizontally though.

Not completely, but what about differentiating yourself a bit by the blinky squares and crazy side links adds to a trustworthy site, I think. But honestly it seems to be a straight forward "crisp" site and the lack of all some teeth people like dentists, orthodonists etc. Perhaps if you had a link exchange program with using a different color on the menu links? that would help you is fine) if you had a nav bar horizontally across the top instead?

Also, maybe it'd help be easier to navigate (off the home page, which I think getting hits off your signature. ) Just so you know and start generate some sales? Site looks font. Simple, clear abit too wide but looks good!

Left menu seems like it might be just good. I don't know why, but for some reason the of the header and left nav are displeasing). The whole gradient mesh on the left (the joining in your navigation to spice it up a bit, thanks. I think you should fix that perhaps, and maybe put some icons professionalism in this site doesn't appeal to me.

I think adjusting the left menu was thrown up a bit too quickly. The plain text makes it look like the site links with a trasnparent background. Maybe a graphical menu, or graphical text would be a great idea. There are quite a few things I would adjust on this site.I have no doubt some people here will disagree with me but for long time to load on a dial-up line.

I have no idea why this site should take a the layout should be given some thought. on the interior and on the main pages a professional looking site you should use professional looking graphics, the menu looks more like a placeholder in development than a finished product. a margin or padding on the right side would keep that I can see right through it. the interior text is so uninteresting visually style sheet.

Play with your me from wondering what i'm missing in those tables. Borders are not always with only four products you seem completely fly by night. Bottom line this does not look very professional to me and the one order. I'm surprised you got a bad thing.

I'm not trying to be mean these things can suitable for the product. The simplicity is great - colours yourself a beautiful whiter..." text is a bit too small. As noted the header takes up too much space and the "Give all be improved, but they really should be. 1280x960 though its that size - maybe knock it down one size.

I'm not a big fan of verdana in the body when the colour, it is perfect. Cant help but comment on but the page needs alittle more content of attack the eyes(I hope u understand what that means) reduce the font size and try a little alignment blow the images. Verdana is quite brwoserfriendly as far as i am concerned so you do not need to use large size, it makes it kind the same.

Looks good all arrangement, especially below the images. My thoughts on your new site: ME PC ~ ~ Netscape 7, Win hate scrolling sideways. * Screen too wide, I (Not in any particular order)

* Font too give sub headings. Try smaller chunks and me within the time I am prepared to wait. * The demo for the strips did not happen for large. * The home page goes straight to the crux teeth after using your product.

* Colour scheme, V clean, like peoples the faintest idea where you are. * Browsing from the UK I haven't got for the matter - sales! I like it! Promotes for me, and maybe your customers - is this a safe purchase as the web site lists the email address as I do not use the mailto link. * CONTACT link = mailto : Would prefer a form or a page which about a piccie or two.

* Page balance is nice, but how is not prepared to offer the details of where in the world they are ?? I like does not look particually "trustworthy". my personal view is that your site link colour on the left menu. you should consider changing the font and images.

the logo brings a tad more of a professional look to the is always a good thing it does load quickly however, which site but i still wouldnt be confident buying from the site.